Introduction, Communication Skills, and Module Goals
Subject: Introduction, Communication Skills, and Module Goals
Dear Professor Blackstone,
I hope this email finds you well. My name is Alson Ho Jian
Wei, and I want to take this opportunity to introduce myself. I will share some
insights into my educational background, communication strengths and
weaknesses, as well as my goals for developing effective communication skills
in your module.
I graduated from Nanyang Polytechnic with a diploma in Architecture
in the year 2021. My passion for civil engineering ignited during my polytechnic
internship at Orion Integrated Services, witnessing a project materialize with
its intriguing structural design. To ensure a comprehensive grasp of structural
principles, I decided to pursue a civil engineering degree.
Civil Engineering is a notably demanding discipline that
necessitates the application of various soft skills, especially effective
communication. In past internships, I encountered instances of heightened
tension, particularly as deadlines approached. Utilizing humour proved
effective in easing tension and creating a positive atmosphere at work. I have
recognized that employing a light-hearted approach is a significant strength in
my communication skills.
Nevertheless, I have received feedback indicating that my
language proficiency, especially in formal settings, is not as adept. In formal
interviews, I tend to employ a more casual speaking style, putting me at a
notable disadvantage compared to other candidates. This tendency may result in
interviewers perceiving me as less serious about the interview process.
My life philosophy advocates embracing humour and joy, yet I
acknowledge the occasional importance of seriousness in life. Successful
communication entails skillfully navigating between the contrasting domains of
seriousness and humour.
This is why I aspire to strengthen my adaptability,
particularly in terms of effectively communicating in every different context. Additionally,
refining my proficiency in formal communication is also one of my objectives
for this module, aiming to enhance my performance in interviews. Recognizing
the significance of effective communication in various contexts, I am committed
to continually improving my skills in this domain.
Thank you for reading this mail.
Best regards,
Alson Ho Jian Wei
Hi Alson, your letter is well-written and interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Alson, I like your life philosophy about embracing humour and joy, I believe that being humorous and joyful is important as it will bring smile to many !
ReplyDeleteHi Alson, your introduction email is well-crafted, showcasing your passion for civil engineering and your insightful reflections on communication strengths and weaknesses.
ReplyDeleteHi Alson, you mentioned that your language profficiency is not good, but the language used in your letter was very fitting to the tone of the assignment! Through practice and reading, i'm sure that your proficiency will improve.
ReplyDeleteYour letter is very well organized and it has a very logical flow when reading it. However, I would have liked ot read more about your experience in your internship company. All in all a great read, well done!
Dear Alson,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this upbeat and informative letter. You address the key components of the brief and provide interesting details. For instance, I really appreciate how you describe your "light-hearted approach" to life and the use of humour in communicating, and how you have to adjust that approach according the varying social circumstances. I'm also impressed by such optimistic values expressed even by the tone in language use in this letter.
There are no language issues in this fluent post, just a few issues with the use of caps:
-- a diploma in Architecture
-- Civil Engineering is a notably demanding discipline....
I look forward to learning more about you this term.
Cheers,
Brad