Design Proposal Video Pitch: Foldable Seat Attachment
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Introduction, Communication Skills, and Module Goals
Subject: Introduction, Communication Skills, and Module Goals Dear Professor Blackstone, I hope this email finds you well. My name is Alson Ho Jian Wei, and I want to take this opportunity to introduce myself. I will share some insights into my educational background, communication strengths and weaknesses, as well as my goals for developing effective communication skills in your module. I graduated from Nanyang Polytechnic with a diploma in Architecture in the year 2021. My passion for civil engineering ignited during my polytechnic internship at Orion Integrated Services, witnessing a project materialize with its intriguing structural design. To ensure a comprehensive grasp of structural principles, I decided to pursue a civil engineering degree. Civil Engineering is a notably demanding discipline that necessitates the application of various soft skills, especially effective communication. In past internships, I encountered instances of heightened tension, particularly as deadlin
Hi Alson, thank you for taking the time to publish your video pitch. Your video shares relevant information about your group's innovation. The video shows great content, it demonstrates good eye contact and good production. (subtitles) However, our group would like to share an area that you could improve on. For instance, articulation and nonverbal movements.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment. I will work to improve.
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