Hi Alson, thank you for taking the time to publish your video pitch. Your video shares relevant information about your group's innovation. The video shows great content, it demonstrates good eye contact and good production. (subtitles) However, our group would like to share an area that you could improve on. For instance, articulation and nonverbal movements.
Subject: Introduction, Communication Skills, and Module Goals Dear Professor Blackstone, I hope this email finds you well. My name is Alson Ho Jian Wei, and I want to take this opportunity to introduce myself. I will share some insights into my educational background, communication strengths and weaknesses, as well as my goals for developing effective communication skills in your module. I graduated from Nanyang Polytechnic with a diploma in Architecture in the year 2021. My passion for civil engineering ignited during my polytechnic internship at Orion Integrated Services, witnessing a project materialize with its intriguing structural design. To ensure a comprehensive grasp of structural principles, I decided to pursue a civil engineering degree. Civil Engineering is a notably demanding discipline that necessitates the application of various soft skills, especially effective communication. In past internships, I encountered instances of heightened tension, particularly a...
Module Learning: Since the start of this module, my primary aim has been to enhance my effective communication skills. Throughout its duration, I have noticed improvements in this area. One aspect that significantly contributed to my progress was the task of reading through the slides. This exercise not only strengthened my English proficiency but also fostered a greater sense of familiarity with the language. Moreover, the module presented an opportunity for me to work on another objective of mine: refining my skills in delivering formal presentations. A significant highlight was the group research project, which required us to pitch our research topic to the professor. This task provided me with a valuable chance to hone my speaking abilities. Both mock presentations and formal presentations were instrumental in this regard. Following the mock presentation, I received constructive feedback on areas for improvement, ranging from presentation delivery to specific points to avoid. This ...
"Developing excellent communication skills is absolutely essential to effective leadership. The leader must be able to share knowledge and ideas to transmit a sense of urgency and enthusiasm to others. If a leader can't get a message across clearly and motivate others to act on it, then having a message doesn't even matter." Gilbert Amelio, former President and CEO of National Semiconductor Corp What I understand from this quotation is e ffective knowledge and idea communication is a necessary qualities for a leader. In addition to providing information, a leader's communication should excite and give others a sense of urgency. According to the statement, a leader's capacity to inspire others to take action is largely dependent on how well their message is received. If a leader cannot effectively convey their message and motivate others to take action, even the most valuable message will be rendered meaningless. In conclusion, the statement emphasizes how cr...
Hi Alson, thank you for taking the time to publish your video pitch. Your video shares relevant information about your group's innovation. The video shows great content, it demonstrates good eye contact and good production. (subtitles) However, our group would like to share an area that you could improve on. For instance, articulation and nonverbal movements.
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